Our bodies so magnificent
Built to withstand stress
But sometimes gets overloaded
Then a massage is downloaded
Start with my feet won't you please
It takes the most pain and abuse
I can go absolutely nowhere without them
I guide his hands to them, where I need him
He takes my feet into his hand ever so gently
At first, then swoosh, he strongly pulls and tugs
He says it is to press the stress off, I think so, too
'Cause when he's through, I am feeling better, no more blue
Then my legs which work along with the efforts of my feet
He rubs them with sweet smelling lotion oh so gently
Up and down, then spiraling like a grand finale'
He's so thorough, touching each point's tally
When he has finished, and I am so relaxed
I feel like heaven, laying on my back
I find I have no need for sex, wow
I'm fully feeling good, right now
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A contest entry
- MASSAGE ME! by Jeremy0826.
750 points, ended July 23, 2007, 10 entries
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This was awesome. no need for sex...ARE YOU CRAZY LOL... j/k this was well penned well thought out, i enjoyed this , thanks for sharingt his with me
oh my wonderful sore hubby, i hope this has helped his tension pains, for it soothed mine.
Bravo
Tory
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You're so kind, thanks and lol
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sounds like my wife, but it is at this point I demand sex.lol...a great write with good rhythm and rhyme
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Thanks Iggy
Sure, Iggy but just know that our hearts not in it. hahahaha
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This is a great poem!
It's a wonderful feeling to have someone
massaging you, especially when they know
what they are doing and what you like.
It's a really pleasurable and relaxing
feeling when you are in this position.
Thank you very much for your entry
and for sharing it with me! I wish
you the best of luck with it and keep
up the wonderful work here!
Jeremy0826 -
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Thank you for these awesome comments about my poem. lol
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