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they must have tripped;

      gold dust,
        secretly shaped into
  feeble falling stars,



        those crumbling twilight confessionals

  fighting summer's embarrassed skies.

















Author notes

because everything has a story.

prompt: sacrificial anecdote

A contest entry

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    July 7, 2007
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    Brilliant! This is really well done and quite captivating! Bravo!


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    July 7, 2007

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    Your Prompts are: Sacrificial Anecdote (not antidote...anecdote) -OR- Placid Echoes I will commence judging at 10:15pm EST (It is 9:44 now) Good luck!