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I’ve strolled in timeless fields of vivid blooms in many of my dreams,
joyfully played amongst smiling stars and their soft flickering beams,
and drank deep of elixirs cool brought by bubbling mountain streams.
When the moment comes to return home to the dawn of a coming day,
I simply fall asleep on a pillow soft dreaming of what I will have to say,
to dear God for bestowing me all these feelings sent in His usual way.
Moments like these are magical and embedded deeply within my mind,
knowing they are for all who choose and seek and always you will find,
that they remind me of a popular poet on AP respected tender and kind.
To sweet Raneika known to us all as Ms Raneika on this vast poet’s site,
for she is as sweet as a dew dipped rose that blossoms during the night,
so A Happy Birthday Sweet Raneika and please continue forever to write.
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A contest entry
- Raneika's Birthday Bash and Anything Goes Contest! (STILL OPEN!!!!!!!!!!!) by Ms Raneika.
436 points, ended July 17, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Brilliant !
I can see why you won Gold with this one
Beautifully penned indeed 
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i'm speechless by your eloquence in this piece.
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This is amazing! I really agree with Ms Raneika, I am speechless. Wonderful write, and a big congratulations on gold!
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Hey by the way if you don't mind can I post this in a blog on my myspace page? I love it that much!
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AWWWWW I am so amaze by your write!!! I'm speechless! WOW BRAVO!!! Thanks for entering my contest much love, Raneika
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