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i still feel it

i remember how i
used to wish for time
to stand still
so i'd never have to leave
i remember that for
the first time
i had a friend
who never asked questions
i remember how
i could finish your sentences
and you could finish mine
i remember how
you could talk
and what you said
always made sense
i remember how
a day never felt complete
without seeing your face
i remember
how you never judged me
i remember how you
thought i could help you
i remember how i felt safe with you
i remember how
we took the fall
for each other
i remember how you were
my best friend
i remember
how i miss you
How could i forget??
Because i still do....

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  • chills gold member
    July 19, 2007
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    Bloody brilliant. Thank you. x chilli


  • EmmaDilemma93
    July 16, 2007
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    awww i like it!!! it's a great poem =D