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Gone

I'm trying to forget
all about you
I just need you out
of my life
You've caused such sorrow
stress, and despair
I really can't take it anymore!
Miserable sometimes around you
miserable without you
I'm tired of trying to get you
I just don't want him anymore!
My mind is made
but my heart's hesitant
I want to hate you,
but my heart won't let me
I know I'm right
but I feel .... empty

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It's so hard letting him go, but I know for sure that it's for the best.

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  • JulietteArielle
    July 7, 2007

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    I like this... I can relate, but for some reason it didn't really catch my attention too much. It is good though.


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    July 7, 2007

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    wow i liked it bunches babe..xoxoxox

    you have a great talent just to say,
    thank you so much for such a lovely poem..<3