Every year I must pretend,
To be a teacher and a friend.
When, finally, in the Half Blood Prince,
I killed Dumbledore, and have been evil since.
They thought that I was actually nice.
Maybe next time, they will think twice!
Because Harry Potter will soon be dead,
And Voldemort will be ahead!
Right now the score is five to none,
But Harry Potter will soon be done!
I am a loyal servant of You Know Who,
I shall remain my whole life through!
That fool Dumbledore let me teach...
The dark arts, that stupid leech.
I always turned out to be the good guy,
No one knew that I was a spy!
The dark ages are now returning,
Where bad is good and nice is burning!
And I shall always be known for,
Killing Dumbledore, all the more!
That stupid Malfoy was supposed to,
But didn't and will punish, that stupid fool!
Like Harry, he will be no more.
This is the day I was waiting for!
Author notes
I have read every single Harry Potter book within a week it has been released! We also own all the movies! lol! This is from Snape's perspective!
A contest entry
- Harry Potter by Corinthians13-4.
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Comments
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Written from book 6 perspective, obviously, but I'll say no more on that. I really really liked this and it's totally the image that I always portrayed of Snape. Good write, nice rhyme, and excellent flow.
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Hm, you wrote this before the final book came out. Talk to me after
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Really Good
This poem was well-written. It rhymed and told people how the sixth book ends! That's pretty skilled. I would also like to say that my favorite part was "...Where good is bad and nice is burning!"
Keep up da good work. Uh oh! Now i am thinking about kittens. Kittens covered with spikes! That makes me angry!
The whole kitten thing is from Red vs. Blue ep. 40 -
GAHHHHHHH!!!!
HALEY!
YOU TOLD ME WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




