Essence of touch life
moisture tightens
relieves contracts
unwind s things
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I read this fascinating poem every which way but lose. It works in any position.
Very original, and damn right creative!
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beautiful.. the love is strong, great word usage and interesting style... thanks for sharing!
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ohhhh you made 'things' so naughty
and yet so eye blinkingly innocent
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very different from anything that i've read before. Very good
xo
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humm this is different, but so very thought provoking xxx
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you burn mr lute?
wonderful mix up of words.. -
Tight.
Cris
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look at you mixing up your fonts. and shapes. like a painting. i like to read all the words at once then up and down or left to right or backwards.
this is about things right?
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mmm, interesting, i've never seen anything quite like it before. thanks a lot for entering my contest and good luck to you,
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ohhh sibilant... ssssssexy
you missbeee in lurvvv Luteylute... play that strangeshapedguitar thingie.. and get down to some sexxy string pullin'...
relief
unwinding...
things
ohh yes... things
I do like dem things.. especusslllly them that do dat thing
relief
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