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Deep Perception

Eyes shining like liquid diamonds
I look deep within the shimmering pools
There are traces of years gone by
Like conceptual wrecks sunken inside
A billion images held in each orb
Sights that have spawned vivid dreams
An electric essence creates an allure
Speaks of wisdom from visions viewed
Eyes are the windows of the soul
Create their own fluid language
They address and beguile their spectator
While seeping their possessors feelings
The truth can play in these spheres
Thus dissolving each effort to lie
The rawest emotions afflicting the heart
Will spill tears and speak of the tale

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  • Knight
    November 14, 2007
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    hi sam where r u


  • galfalfa gold member
    September 20, 2007

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    The eyes have it...and tell so much. They tell you what you want to see and sometimes what you dont.
    Loved this Sam! Its beautiful,

    galfalfa