This isn't just a teenage fairytale
This isn't just a Cinderella story
This isn't just a teen runaway
This isn't just a secret hideout
This is reality
This is fate
This is passion
This is destiny
This is the way it's meant to be
Lying here with you
Holding each other hand in hand
This is hope
This is trust
This is life
This is love
A contest entry
- Just Me...And You... by FlipperSwitch.
600 points, ended September 8, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-write Party 2 by DancingRed.
300 points, ended September 22, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lovely emotions expressed through these words. I like the control over the flow - it's slower at the beginning and quickens with the shorter lines. Very effective.
Thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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it has a kinda different rythm and i like it for that and its really simple its really good but i think it lacks a certain passion and feeling
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Simple and beautiful...very very beautiful. I like the form, the style, the honesty and simplicity. Thank you for the write.
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Very nicely done!
You wrote this very well; I truly enjoyed reading!!!
Wishing you all the very best in this contest!
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Great poem and nice usees of devices.
Luv,
Candy
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awww this is AWESOME
and i love it
-Stary -
i really like this poem i can really relate to it and i feel the same whay too awosme write
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Thanks for the comment..I really appreciate it.
xoxo Jackie
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