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velevet silk

shes fallen apart yes
but do we know why
hiding her secrets
beneath the sky
of velvet silk

in her mind
she thinks she insane
going through days
in tons of pain
maybe she'll let her secrets go

her secrets deep
involving blood
what in the hell
has she done
she wont tell

will we find out
maybe so
its a possibility
don't you know
we'll eventually take her down

she hides under the blanket
all day
we'll get her out
we'll treat her this way
it wont be so bad

it may have started
as childhood abuse
she couldn't hold it in
she never made a truce
she can make it now

so as she sits
beside her bed
all these thoughts
ran through her head

Author notes

SHES A YOUNG 20 YEAR OLD LADY NOW BUT AS A YOUNG KID SHE WAS HURT ABUSED AND SHE WOULD HOLD IT IN AS A GRUDGE SO SHE WANTS TO GO AFTER THE PERSON WHO MISTREATED HER BUT SCARED OF WHAT WOULD HAPPEN AGAIN

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 11, 2008

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    This is a wonderful poem, and congratulations on your bronze win for it. Unfortunately since it has won a bronze trophy it is not eligible to be considered in this contest. Rules are honorable mention winning only. Sorry.

    ♥
    whisper


  • littlehound15
    October 3, 2007
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    you are a great poet

  • Virgoan
    September 2, 2007

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    Nicely written poem

    Thanks so much for participating in my contest. I wish you all the best. I encourage you to keep on writing my friend.

    >>>VIRGOAN

  • Mercury Rising
    July 9, 2007

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    Quite the intense and emotional poem that was very well-crafted. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.

    David


  • MotherMachineGunn
    July 7, 2007
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    Very nice take on the picture. I love the direction you took with this piece. Thank you so much for your entry and Best of luck to you in the contest.

    ~MotherMachineGunn~

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