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The Word for God on the Lips of Children

You are the word for god
on my childish lips
the true reason for my life.

You are face of the moon
in my tear lace eyes
when the world does turn to night

You are the lips of the sun
at my deaf fall ears
when reason loses its sight.

You are the hand of the stars
of my eternal soul
when it needs to take flight.

Your are my mother
so true and kind
to love you is only right.

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  • kennethlaney
    July 26, 2007
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    Very Good Poem

    It was a very beautiful poem by a beautiful lady if this is your picture on the authors page and you were the writer. Not trying to be funny but I saw the RANSOMED-N-REDEEEMED an was a bit confused.
    "BOO"
    LiKED THE STYLE


  • Ransomed-n-Redeemed
    July 24, 2007
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    this poem is beautiful and very true. Nice job, good lucki n the contest.
    ~R&R


  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 9, 2007
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    Beautiful

    Truly a beautiful write you have here it brought tears to my eyes