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Never again

Yeah so when i walked down those steps
You all were watching me
Laughing inside
Waiting for me to fall
To fall on my face
You all wished i wouldn't make it
I walked down
Out the door
Things in hand
I never went back
No matter what you say
I'll never believe
The words that leave those lips
I learned long ago
That you are all liars
You only want whats best for you
None of you care about anyone else
So i walked out that door
Things in hand
Never to return

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  • CountryCousin
    June 4, 2008

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    Again.

    I can realize that there is someone you are saying this too. That is okay and once again put the comment in your author's notes. Walking away a winner, walking away from a losing game.


  • princess hope
    January 8, 2008
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    I can see the hurt in this poem, Thank you for your entry and best of luck.


  • Dalaney gold member
    July 19, 2007

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    I second what Whoochi said...

    Thank you so much for this
    entry, and I hope you will
    continue to enter my contests.

    Love, Lane


  • Whoochi gold member
    July 10, 2007
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    awwwwwwwww heart wrenching...tell me who they are, I will kickbox them into a corner...

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