Love costs everything.
Be prepared for the bill
when it comes due.
A single song cannot undue the pain,
and all the words in hell
won't free your heart.
Be patient with time,
it takes a while to roll around,
And when you look back
thru the roses
you'll see a rusty mail box
with a red flag up,
stuffed with notes gone bad.
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2/2/96
Written August 22nd, 2003
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I liked this one Is that the way you feel about our love Lute?
your truly your wife melissa 17224
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Love does cost everything...it takes your whole heart and soul. You give it away, and sometimes it comes back broken and in need of healing. There is a chance it will be replaced by another heart and soul for you to love and protect.
THis is a wonderful piece.
Sam
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Very nice
Very Nice but how true... Better to have loved and lost then to have never known what love is... thanks for sharing. Alia -
Sigh! Love---life----learned----oft late at times, but good learned nonetheless.
::Sighs deeply once more::
Sarah -
your simplicity here is wonderful and marks the piece as something to think on
i enjoy the bit of a riddle contained here, somehow, and also is there a hint of advice, of warning or somesuch?
very enjoyable and oddly grave -
Love the first line...and be prepared for the bill..hehe oh yeah love costs and you lose half in the trade-in.
I don't believe in the love is free and all things to all man..it is a hard and dangerous game to play that rewards and betrays at the very same time.
Always as always is - lovely.
thru
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Thanks for such an honest opinion on my poem. I liked this one though, It's very nice.
-Carina- -
unrequitted love...sniffle... Val
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the right kind of love is free.... but then maybe I am naive about it all.......
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