Ravenous vultures seek prey,
everything for the taking.
black hearted demons
smother innocence.
dollar bills worshipped,
God of currency;
pecks out eyes of humanity.
Author notes
Greed
A contest entry
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Wonderfully penned. Good luck and thanxx for entering.
Luv,
Candy
Contest Holder
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Thank You!
Thank You for Your entry: God of Currency
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Strengths I inhaled:
Love the images You have brought forth
with Fantastic metaphors...Took me there and
can see the Greed in what You speak just ooze
from the page.
Love the Associating of greed with vultures
metaphor
Thank You.
Judging will be completed shortly
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~Desire~*~
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