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Delving Inside Reflections

Formulated trepidations lingering
upon unsettled memories, and yet nothing
could still mimic the affectivity of stagnation;
trickled condensation and propagandarized
fissures leaving merely some formal perpetual
manifestation

Varied sentimentalities lie in wake rethinking of
ways amongst cinderblock concrete for unknown
acknowledgement dared only to be a raft

Where words where unsteadily scribed, phrases
uneasily structuralized leaving only traced amounts
of self instructions; transgressed impressionalism altered
inside perceived skeletal outlining

Conformed, dimidiation spoke of uncertainty—perhaps
even of questionable routes to travel

Creation of thought, resuming possibilities of unvoiced
scriptures, life resumed motionlessly upon
cragged rocks lying underneath this thing
called ink

And distilled solitude blanketed this façade of
diluted encryption; seepage in-between crystallized
circumferences alongside alliterative literature, but still
a form of pomegranate mirages will inhale an aerosol aspiration

Was this to be equally known in blind eyes?

Matters in mannerisms soon dived in lineage
beyond informal  existence, for an inaudible shatter
collapsed this very mirage now firmly torn apart

Author notes

Bow of the Idem
Michael Kahn
http://www.fulcrumgallery.com/print_145771.aspx

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  • Cannonsfire
    July 9, 2007

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    A very abstract and contemporary view of the poem that delves deep in its thought process, I see you have said more will be added but it seems a finished product to me unless you change your mind. I like it as is. Love, C