~*~
Love~
That fine breath,
fresh air~
That rare romantic
feeling.
~*~
A contest entry
- 10 words 10 entries 10 minutes - 5 by Namita.
300 points, ended July 7, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Raneika's Birthday Bash and Anything Goes Contest! (STILL OPEN!!!!!!!!!!!) by Ms Raneika.
436 points, ended July 17, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like short poetry...such a meaningful statement...
thanks for entering my contest much love, Raneika
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easy breathing yes
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Love is a lot of things...and it changes for everyone. Love to you is one thing, while love to me is another. Aw! The greatness of emotions. How they differ from one person to the next.
I smell a winner. -
very pretty. nice write, good luck in the contest.
♥
whisper
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A great poem- well worded, but your line-breaking could have been better. I'm not impressed by your breaks. But, good job anyway. Luck wished.
Luv,
Candy
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Thank you so much
And thanks for the line breaking suggestion. Is this better?
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Hi, Thanxx for entering. Your prompt is - yes, the usual cliche, LOVE ♥♥. I want NON-cliche writes on this cliche topic- 10 words only. Luck wished. Hope you do well. Luv, Candy :f
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Up for the challenge? Me too. Good luck.
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