Oh God
It is preached that you figure us parallel
as we all have one nose two eyes,two hands, two legs etc
we all are parallel as you shaped us identical
however our endures are uneven
our cheers are aberrant
our anguishes are contrasting
do you write the fortunes of ours too
and that too, so contradictory sometimes ?
Oh God...
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Comments
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wow....excellent questions to ponder..
emotion throughout!
TY for entering!
Lynda
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You write so well when you question God. Your questions rarely seem asked in anger or resentment, but always in wonder and yearning for the answers. This is poigngnt for me, this question, 'Do you also write our fortunes'...but I would answer, no, He does not write them, He only gives us the pen...we have the freedom to choose; though we may not always be aware in the moments what and who and how we choose...Well penned. Peace, Rhonda
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