I’ve got a head full of pain
And a heart full of mess
This burning pain
Gives me no rest
Slowly driving me insane
I need to grieve to leave this pain
So many things I’d like to do
But I’m stuck in here without you
I’m looking out on a world so bright
But this world is no longer right
Looking for someone to make me better
But with sweat I’m getting wetter
Now this fevers running high
What can I do without you by my side?
My headaches for sickness, My heart aches for you
How are we supposed to get through?
Searing pain through my eyes
This is a pain I cannot disguise
No tablets will help it
My pain will not quit
It’s a pain of a new kind
Because it comes from inside my mind
It’s a pain from thinking too much
Missing the feeling of your touch
I’ll lie down for a few minutes
I’ll have a dream with you in it
In my dream I’m free from pain
No longer alone watching the rain
You are here by my side
In my dream you never died
A contest entry
- Uff........This Headache!!! by Laughing Buddh.
500 points, ended July 14, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Filled with emotion, any kind of poetry by Vidasmoke.
675 points, ended July 14, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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its touching
the last thing makes me think
good job and good luck
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It's a pain from thinking too much...
So very many times I have felt that way.
This was a great poem that truly makes you feel the pain. Before I reached the end and realized it was the pain caused by a death, I felt as if I could have written it. I often have headaches, both literally and figuratively, due to all the noise in my head. I tell everyone that thinking is bad for the soul, and here, you painted that picture very well.
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strong write.. kinda relatable to other subjects besides headace... emotions flow and pain is reflected
nice write ..best of luck in the contest
regards
abuyi
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