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~Haze~





Hallucinating haze -
expanding eclectic emotions
through experimentation
and poetic prisms.





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Sleep tight!

Prompt - Ten words

I basically want you guys to make me feel good about being buzzed right now... Cause I'm really having a rare good time but come tomorrow????????
It'd be nice to look back on this.

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  • crivanea silver member
    October 15, 2007
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    lovely..this is very nice..i love it..in 10 words u capture the feeling of haziness perfectly..kinda like how we feel when we're stuck writing a piece..that we feel is not quite right..but through many experiments/cloudy visions..we finally get a masterpiece..lovely piece..


  • sheltered
    July 8, 2007
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    Excellent.


  • PerfectImperfection
    July 7, 2007

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    Such a potent expression of a poet, and the illusion that can define. Well penned!


  • tawk gold member
    July 7, 2007

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    Wow, such unique use of the prompt. Amazing you truly have the gift of written word. Good luck in the contest


  • HeavenScent4U
    July 7, 2007

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    very well done prompt or no prompt, i think you gave the person what they asked for best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed

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