Compliment the grandeur curve of craft,
That opposite each lie in wide awake
For underneath where symmetry is ample
Transpose another epidemic thought.
True slant from the hyperbolic maze,
Of tranquil in succeeding what to do's,
They equally divide a truth in depth.
And one way or the other each denies,
The other coexisting on thin film.
Fluid feel of exponation wrangles
That cannot fathom out, as either does
To why the blessed form in their revival,
Overthrows the other, than truer love.
Yet not as each alike to other movements
That corresponding surge that undecided,
Which least depicted same saw this romance
Or if in fact the other played these games.
Dissecting one another at a glance.
Where this not knowing ounces residue,
Of understanding leased the longest love
Admiring the above as the abyss,
Astounding marinades a self same broth.
Author notes
And one way or the other each denies,
The other coexisisting on thin film.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired by Cannonsfire.
4500 points, ended July 20, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Reading your poems just takes the reader into another world that is unforgettable..beautiful flow of language and an enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest..take care.
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You are by far one of the eloquent writers I have read recently. Your choise of worded expressions sometime far to deep for me and I am sure many other, who wll not admit this. None the less I love reading your work!!!!!!
I feel in reading this piece, you are speaking of two lovers..... one in denial of their love.... Lovely piece.... Brilliant write!!!
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Fine metaphorical piece, the abstract and contemporary feel of the poem gives the flow of the rippled water as you read. I enjoyed this. Thank you for your entry. Love, C ps
o not rate or reply until end of contest, thank you 
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Oh my! I didn't want this to stop. Your unique verbiage flows as liquid smooth as the water below the keel pictured. Metaphoricly perfect this poem is more descriptive than the picture provided.
Love,
Amera ♥
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