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Survival

Pimps, prostitutes and bums
all misfits
more or less

Born into a life
where a future may be
no better than selling
ones body to survive
Victims of parental abuse
and slaves to the
pressures of everyday living

A child with innocent eyes
watches her Mother earn their dinner
learning the only way to fill the hole
in her tummy is this way
The way her Mother does it
keeping a roof over their heads
and getting them through each day

 

The sufferers of drepression

drinking to kill the pain they feel

The only way they know to get through

another day

They swill it back

directly from the bottle

Once this proud person

had values and knew respect

now they have nothing

The values of human dignity
cast aside in favor of survival
knowing no other way than
the way they have been shown
The revolving door swings them
around and around

in a continuing circle

Finally one day the spinning stops
The remains of a would have been
could have been soul
Spinning away into oblivion
Just so much waste material
thrown out casually
at one of the side doors
of the world

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    July 21, 2007
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    Fabulously done! You have given me exactly what I was hoping for and even a little more. This is a wonderful portrait of what goes on right outside our very windows... in the dark alleys, behind places conducting their daily business... Nice job! Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • Frozentearz
    July 7, 2007

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    I would have to say you dug deep and beyond with these words of life delivered through poetry, This is very charged with truths from life,
    Thank you for sharing with us.
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz


  • xXEndless-PainXx
    July 7, 2007

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    When they said "Dig Deep" you did just that!!! That was one of the deepest poems ever!!!!!Good luck with the contest!!!!


  • Puppydog gold member
    July 7, 2007
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    SO TOUCHING AND EMOTIONAL!!!

    Sadly so many the world over fall prey to this and believe these are the only ways, but they always end up realizing that as they resort to these ways they give up the things that they can never get back again. A terrible way to find out but one that I fear will never change.

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