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Geisha

Her pale fingers grasp
The brilliant colored fan
Gracefully spinning

Lowered eyes fix on
The silk that wraps her body
With cherry blossoms

White makeup, layered
Upon her quiet features,
Hides her blushing cheeks

She is innocent,
Hiding away from the world,

Author notes

I'm pretty sure I invented this style, though I wouldn't be suprised if it already existed - linked haikus as stanzas.

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