Wings...
is what I need,
to escape this world,
of manipulation and deception.
Wings..
is what I need,
to fly away,
from this hell pit.
Wings...
is what I need,
to complete,
this transformation of me.
Wings..
is what need,
to be free...
like a bird...
wings...freedom...serenity...
alas,happiness...
is what I need,
to escape this world,
of manipulation and deception.
Wings..
is what I need,
to fly away,
from this hell pit.
Wings...
is what I need,
to complete,
this transformation of me.
Wings..
is what need,
to be free...
like a bird...
wings...freedom...serenity...
alas,happiness...
Author notes
I hope u like it. Um, what I want to say is that the persona's ticket to freedom is wings. He wants to be free like a bird. Um, the last lines:
wings...freedom...serenity...
alas,happiness...
shows that he got the wings he needed,had completed his transformation (bird/angel etc...),and found happiness. He is actually based on one of my characters named Billy...so,yeah...
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Comments
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wow, this is awesome I love it, great write

