Come and dance with me,
under the bright stars,
in the month of May,
where the flower blooms,
though not as fair as you.
Come with me to the old oak tree,
were we shared our first kiss.
You will find a ring,
with diamond stone,
similar to your sparkling silver eyes.
Come with me to the garden,
where we first laid eyes on each other.
Under the moonlight bay,
we will declare our love,
and be unite by sacred bond of marriage.
Author notes
KEY WORDS:LOVE...hope u like it...
A contest entry
- LET ALL YOUR EMOTIONS OUT by Jessica Lyndsay.
450 points, ended July 7, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think and be harsh!!
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Truly a sweet loving piece. Such a special way to propose not only love, but to spend a life with another. Lovely.
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thank you emilia!!
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wow, this is amazing love it it's so beautiful good luck in the contest
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thanks farrah...i'm glad u like it...
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your welcome farah, it's a great poem
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