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Lustful Queen

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Claw like hands scratching at my skin
Your eyes penetrating  my almost naked body
Tightening the restraints as I sit there helpless
I become intrigued by  your desire
an exciting  warmness engulfing me

 

Diabolical laughter echoing  through the room
Feeling faint as my vision becomes blurred
from this  insatiable desire
A fiery tongue licking my breasts
singeing their nipples
Cooling that fire as you enter my wetness

 

Intoxicated by the power you possess
I evoke more of your wicked lustfulness
Longing to reach the ecstasy of  pain
to feel the pleasure of my submission
Wanting only to become your queen

 

 

 

 

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  • Naridill gold member
    November 8, 2007

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    Ohhhhl~! Divine erotic stuff. Very nicely penned and enthralling in weird creepy ways

    Thanks for entering and much luck ~~~!

  • getsbetter
    August 7, 2007

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    Very strong and xlnt flow in this write, Enjoyed reading every word my friend. No wonder your the soulful woman. Keep it up (as they say)...GETS


  • Knight70
    July 14, 2007
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    Well deserved gold!!!!!

    That is an incredibly dark, erotic piece, Noreen. You captured the essence of the artwork brilliantly.


    Diabolical laughter echoing through the room
    Feeling faint as my vision becomes blurred
    from this insatiable desire


    These three lines lept out at me.


  • esroddo silver member
    July 11, 2007

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    Congratulation On the Gold

    I was well deserved, you write is totally amazing, So dark, erotic and powerful. You blew me away. I love these lines (LISA)
    "A fiery tongue licking my breasts
    singeing their nipples
    Cooling that fire as you enter my wetness

    Intoxicated by the power you possess
    I evoke more of your wicked lustfulness
    Longing to reach the ecstasy of pain'


  • patsoldcat
    July 8, 2007

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    A fiery tongue licking my breasts
    singeing their nipples
    Cooling that fire as you enter my wetness

    omg, how much more could one ask for to see erotica and then the whole dark feeling
    great job.


  • Amera gold member
    July 8, 2007

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    Oh my! How did I miss this? Talk about a powerful poem! The image in this is painful. As submissive as I am, I do'nt think the pain would be necessary. I'm a wimp. Fantastic write my friend.

    Love,
    Amera ♥


  • MrGW
    July 8, 2007
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    Wonderfully erotic....as always

    Soulful Woman knows what erotic is!


  • Whoochi gold member
    July 7, 2007

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    wowza...woman....I mean I knew ya had it in ya but only cause well, we best bitches and all...but dam for all the world to see..This is good without going over the top..and what a picture....Good luck...


  • patsoldcat
    July 7, 2007
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    thank you

    blessings and luck
  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    July 7, 2007
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    awsome write to go with the pic
    full of lust and seduction
    awsome
    good luck


  • Heavenly Angel
    July 6, 2007

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    You go, girl!
    A fabulously AWESOME write of lust and seduction!
    ROCK ON!!!
    All the very best to you in this contest!
    Yayyyy!!!!!

  • Cerulean gold member
    July 6, 2007
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    Wow. great take on the pic!

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