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Pretty Package

I'm a pretty gift wrapped package
My ribbon all done in a bow
Sparkling and shiny, pleasing to eyes
No one would guess I'm a box full of lies

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short, sweet, and hopefully gets the point across.

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  • saints and martyrs
    December 7, 2007
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    great!

    Thats awesome, Im laughing my ass off. Gotta love it!