Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Graced By An Angel



Crystal star dust sprinkles a reverie of whispers
upon its lush mountain valleys,
taming the cliffsides to slumber

A lazy river resonates canyon walls,
dancing splashes of purity,
to lull my heartstrings

Peaceful moments in nature
soothes my restless spirit,
untouched, untamed,
nurtured by the essence of moonbeams

With each footprint I leave; I ponder
reasoning my struggles,
contemplating sporadically,
trounced;

by splendorous beauty

My saunter caresses the rich earth,
sinking into her warm embrace enfolds my being,
enhancing senses
comforting thoughts... of all to be

As I find my favorite nest to settle
a brilliant shimmering light adorns the leaves~
tears of joy suddenly trickles my blush
gently,
cascading into grace
as winds swirl a serenade...

 

 

 

~Honest man of heartStrong in convictions

Life has no boundaries to your muse

It is your universe of treasured moments offering hope~

An Angel

interlaced your soul with nature’s gift of vision;

feathered quill in one hand

painting a canvas of emotions with love~ 

 

 

 

Author notes

I do not know you as well as some other poets Rich, but I do know nature, love and all the wonders of life hold the key to your heart and beautifully pours into your poetry with such joy for all of us to enjoy!!
Smile.
Linda
OH yes... option 1

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 6 of 6

  • kaibab silver member
    July 7, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Sigh in kindred waves of Nature...where we are one inside her throught, where creation's circles every life line...giving word to windy river...in secrets shared to souls in common...thanks Jazzy...lovely poetry


  • poet2angels gold member
    July 6, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    wow

    This is so beautiful, my dear friend...
    You captured so much of him in this poem and his womderful spirit...
    TY forr joining in the celebration!
    He will treasure this!!!!


    Lynda


  • Deindichter
    July 6, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Cool poem.
    I would suggest in the first stanza cultivating might not be the best choice of word, but this is solely an opinion. Beyond that one hangup I found your poem to be A) jam packed with beautiful images; great word choice, of the likes of a wordsmith if ever I met her. And most importantly you have poetic elements running amuck, which is always good to see, in lieu to the fact that we're on a poetry site, alliteration in your poetry seems an almost forgotten passion of the poets, yet you among other tools employed them masterfully. Well done.


    • jasminerose
      July 6, 2007
      Edit | Reply

      Thank you!

      Hello Deindichter,
      Great Pic! Thank you for your wonderful indepth compliments about my poem
      I was editing as you were reading as my computer is a bit on the slow side today.. I did change that one word as I too thought.. hmm wasn't exactly the point I was trying to get across and I do appreciate that you shared your thoughts with me
      I like the poetic elements running amuck.. a bit like my life at times..lol
      Thank you so much for your beautiful comments and it is very nice to meet you and hear your thoughts on my poem!!
      Jasminerose


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    July 6, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Jazzy, this is truly beautiful!!!
    I know Rich will LOVE this!
    All the very best to you, hon!
    Awesome write!!!!


    • jasminerose
      July 6, 2007
      Edit | Reply

      Thank you!

      Thank you so very much Sandy for your lovely compliments on my poem
      I hope he does as this was what I think about when reading his beautiful poems! Thanks so much..
      Jazzy

1 - 6 of 6