Am I right
Is it wrong
To want to be held?
Needed
Loved
?
I guess so
How can you tell me
That I'm pretty
When i can't get a date
I'm just a second rate lover
Never given a chance
To love
Forget the stupid labels
Sugar
It's about time to get down
&& dirty
Cuz face it
It's what you do best
So pucker up sweetheart
We'll fuck the night away
In satin sheets
&& Vodka dreams
Sounds like a sexy party
You know
It sounds like a plan
Author notes
Option one:: Dirty Pretty.
'Your Heart Is My Symphony'
A contest entry
- && I'd rather have a b r u i s e d pelvis;; than a //sha tte red\\ ♥ by PaintedParisPassion.
500 points, ended July 19, 2007, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*~All Your Dirty Pretty Comes Here~*~ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
625 points, ended December 30, 2008, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I'm just a second rate lover
Never given a chance
To love
Forget the stupid labels
Sugar
It's about time to get down
&& dirty
Cuz face it
It's what you do best
So pucker up sweetheart
We'll fuck the night away
In satin sheets
&& Vodka dreams
Sounds like a sexy party
You know
It sounds like a plan
I love those stanzas the most although the whole poem effin' roxs. You are talented bbydoll, and it shows. Don't ever hide it or deny it...anyone can write, not every one can be l e g e n d...and no one but you can be my trashcan romance! I♥u!
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That means so freeking much to me honeybunch. No one but you can be my failed alleyway affair.
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Love It!!
I like this poem Mel -
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Wow. You probably shouldn't be reading my stuff.
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This is how I felt until i came to the school for the visually impaired... nobody fancied me, everyone thought I was dump and had no real purpose in life. Bullied and tormented - now look at me, I've been told I beat most of the people my age in intelligence! Just goes to show you never really know. As long as you try, you can get results! Trust me, I TRIED SO F*KING HARD!
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it's so sad when people judge others before they know them or what they are capable of. I'm glad you showed them all up! Good on you honey.
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please please please go back and read the rules, you didnt follow them and i really like this so i dont want to DQ it.
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aww...how sad. i feel for you. as strange as it sounds, i like the way the angst comes out in the poem. it had emotion. good job
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