My finger slowly g~r~a~z~e~s the blade
temptation
[in its deadliest form]
My.knife...vs...your.throat
Darling,
Lets c/u\t out all the bullshit
I want to f
---------------------a
---------------------l
---------------------l in love with your {SCREAMS}
&& hear you beg for your
pathetic
excuse
of a
life
you | should | have | seen | this | coming
the day you "rescued" me
[barefoot on the sid/e of the road]
&& you thought all that blood was mine...
pathetic
you were all
con]solation && p-p-p-pretty lips
Darling, you had it coming
the moment you touched[violated]me
&& just like the others
you'll
.get.
yours
&& now you're helpless
b-l-e-e-d-i-n-g ]out[ on the kitchen floor
hand still holding /tight\ to my ankle
just so you know;;;
you're not the 1first1
(((try 7seventh7 or 8eighth8)))
&& yes hunny,
it's all your fault
you see,
you asked my -name-
.
.
.
not my history
[♥]
Author notes
Hmmm, I don't know if this is what you were looking for, but I hope you like it none the less, doll.
[♥]
A contest entry
- [B~l~o~o~d] on our *Hands* by whiterabbit..
375 points, ended July 18, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is excellent dirty pretty and has a very creative flair plus an intriguing storyline. I love it!

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I absolutely love this. This is what I'm looking for, don't worry. I love the no pity attitude it has. The wording is wonderful. I love the title and it's a perfect ending for this. Great job. Thanks for entering doll.

