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((you asked my name...not my history))

My finger slowly g~r~a~z~e~s the blade
temptation
[in its deadliest form]

My.knife...vs...your.throat

Darling,
        Lets c/u\t out all the bullshit
          I want to f
---------------------a
---------------------l
---------------------l in love with your {SCREAMS}
        && hear you beg for your
                  pathetic
                    excuse
                      of a
                        life
you | should | have | seen | this | coming
  the day you "rescued" me
                  [barefoot on the sid/e of the road]
&& you thought all that blood was mine...
                 
                  pathetic

you were all
      con]solation && p-p-p-pretty lips
                        Darling, you had it coming
                            the moment you touched[violated]me
                        && just like the others

  you'll
  .get.
  yours

                && now you're helpless
                          b-l-e-e-d-i-n-g ]out[ on the kitchen floor
                      hand still holding /tight\ to my ankle
                             
                    just so you know;;;
you're not the 1first1
                              (((try 7seventh7 or 8eighth8)))
&& yes hunny,
    it's all your fault
you see,
                  you asked my -name-
              .
              .
              .
                  not my history



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Author notes

Hmmm, I don't know if this is what you were looking for, but I hope you like it none the less, doll.
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Comments

  • tigress3737
    July 14, 2007

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    This is excellent dirty pretty and has a very creative flair plus an intriguing storyline. I love it!


  • whiterabbit.
    July 6, 2007

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    I absolutely love this. This is what I'm looking for, don't worry. I love the no pity attitude it has. The wording is wonderful. I love the title and it's a perfect ending for this. Great job. Thanks for entering doll.