guns and helmets lead the way
through the path's of victory
destiny is hiding beneath the soil
waiting for the spirits to arise
dry cold earth beneath war boots
no tears fall from no faces
for adrenaline keeps them alive
to fight for what they believe in
hold your rifle as you were told
never look back, never feel homesick
for you may return to your loved ones
or you may fall, in a bed of hot sand
no one shall win, only death will rule
blood will never dry from the battlefield
it might be diluted, by lost love tears
rivers of scarlet will cross this land
who hides, behind the cursed puppets?
what makes them breathe pain and blood?
such answer is hidden beneath wealth and power
waiting to be revealed, just for once
Author notes
I'm the less patriotic person you will ever meet, and im not even NORTH american.
i couldnt relate much to this, but i did my best.
A contest entry
- *Slower Than a Quickie* 10-20-30 by Arkbear.
300 points, ended July 6, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Kill love, have fun, and whatever by Anastasiya.
657 points, ended July 26, 2007, 22 entries
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Very good. YOu did good in relating to the americans. thanks. good luck.
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For not relating you did a darnn good job at writing this - good enough for the gold. Great flow and images you leave us with - aced the picture. Way to go. Gladayou got the title in. LOL
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Unbelievable write ~
Please do not respond to this as this is an anonymous contest ~
Thank you soooo much for entering ~
Bear ~
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Great job of relating! Great write and goes so well with the picture
Good luck
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Please give the poem a title for the contest that you are entered in with Arkbear
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edited, sorry for not changing it.
*tho im not the greatest with choosing titles*
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Theresa ~
Can you pleeeez tell the author of this poem it needs a Ttile ~
It's anonymous so I can't!!!!!!!
Judging VERY soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks Hun!!!!!!!!!!
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