Hello,
My name is Crystal Meth,
I make you feel really nice,
My freinds name is Ice,
You and freinds use me alot,
Not like your ex-best freind pot,
Dont get caught with me,
You'll go to jail and that's where you'll be,
But dont you love me,
Some love me a alot,
Some dont like me at all,
But that's ok cause we'll let them fall,
Dont be afraid of me,
I'll make it all better you'll see,
Even though I do kill,
And go ahead mix me with pills,
I wont hurt you,
Your my best freind,
Even though I will turn on you in the end,
I'll dry your tears,
You'll have no more fears,
Go ahead and sniff me, eat me, or even smoke me
You'll see,
Dont trust me,
If you get caught,
It's your faught,
Dont expect no help,
Cause your the one who asked me for help,
I do favors,
Not return them,
You still want to be my freind,
Even though I'll hurt you in the end.
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My name is..
(drugs) ok your thinking of bad things im not encourging....Just read...
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Awesome
If just more people would send this message out. Maybe it'd help. I wrote an acrostic about meth -
I like this alot.. kind of spastic, changing subjects.. which pretty much describes the drug itself.
Great write!
Angie
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Wow this is a damn powerful piece. Even though there a feww grammatical errors, but this I LOVE the flow and the feeling it gave me when I was reading this. Keep it up!
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very nice wright i must say i liked it a lot,
you have some talent sweetie,
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hey this is great britt keep up the good work and i love you
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cool, nice peice.. (btw my friends call me crystal meth>.<)
lol
<3
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Interesting
I like the approach, but you seemed to hold back a little. I think you could have put a little more feeling in this. I guess it depends if you have experienced it. Spellcheck sucks on here, but you do have a few errors. I'm not bashing. Overall, I thought you did good. Feel free to read mine if you like. It is similarin nature. Good luck on the contest!
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umm...
i have done it before.... and i know that i could have done better but when your house it full of people and you cant think you wouldnt be able to write either... i will come back to fix this when all these people leave but thanks for the comment and for telling me i have errors and my spelling ill fix it....
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I like your personification of the drug Crystal Meth, it makes it seem even more intimidating. Thanks for the entry as well as following the rules-- although I suggest that you spell check this. Thanks!
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