Full with images of this life and still
no one heard the winds talk about a
place yet unknown
Where tunes from the radio
filtered in then out the passage ways
formally called hallways-- no, corridors
and still (again), the audiolisticness
fell upon written wordings of self
wisdom
But then perhaps, it was while tuning
out that things in-between became of clarity
This neither of us knew just yet
amongst the fog
Is this why we've endured for
so long only to laugh behind
other's backs' ?
Author notes
I know the song very well hence if this seems a bit 'dark' it pertains to how friends are always there even when you're in that dark hole
B Chandler
A contest entry
- Friends are forever~ Contest for my friends on AP only~ by Angel With No Halo.
800 points, ended July 12, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow, totally incredible job. I love it and I can feel how sincere you are in it. Very well done and I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
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I am so glad yo see your entry here!! I have had a couple friends who have been there in those dark times... but none ever stay.. I seem to end up in the dark too much for them aparently.
Your poem took a great turn into that place .. for.. to me.. that is what friends are for.. they are a shoulder to lean on, someone to confide and true friends are supposed to be there through thick and thin.. no matter what. I just wish I knew where to find of those friends
You are an amazing poet my dear.. and I just love the way your put your words together... abstract yet so full of clarity. 
Thank you for entering this contest my friend. 
Love,
~Krys~
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