I see you,
once again.
My heart receives you,
My mind...
Fears the trend...
You hurt me.
I know that
You pretend.
You think you’ve fooled me-
But I...
See the end.
How could you?
Time goes by...
Watching close.
Some hurts can’t be healed
With a...
Simple rose.
Remember.
There was once
A good time.
But you’ve forgotten...
Love and...
Pain don’t rhyme.
I’m leaving.
You don’t try
To step in.
You know that I’ve seen
The soul...
You’ve within.
Not afraid.
Years go by,
Now I know.
I’ve healed and learned that
Without love,
Time is slow.
I’m learning.
It’s been a...
Little while.
Maybe in some time,
I’ll find...
I can smile.
On my own.
Author notes
Inspired by the song Sixth Station from the movie Spirited Away. The song has no words so I was kinda humming some made up ones to myself, then was inspired to write a poem!
rhyming scheme, use of each stanza's last line
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this is a beautiful poem! i really love it! it has such an inspiring feel to it that you just get engrossed with it and its like your saying something about your own life that someone else has writtn about you! good write!
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wow...this has great affect and is writen exreamly well... its wonderfull
the last stanza is exeptionaly beautiful and is wonderfully written! keep it up nice work!!!!!
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that is wonderful, I've never heard the song but I want to now!!! really relate to it and I LOVE LOVE LOVE the last stanza!!!
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I loved it. It has really good rhythm, and it fits the song well.
BTW I loved that movie =) -
this is really good. i love the idea that you have and i can feel the emotion. great piece.
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This poem was kinda written to be read while listened to a certain song, so the rythm/beat might seem a bit 'off'.
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