Will you regret me?
Your dirty little secret
[[You promised
to never tell]]
You turn to me
With that sly look in your eyes
"Baby, I'll never tell"
You plunge your dagger
Deep within my heart
This heart
[[That so carelessly beat
For only you]]
Watch the blood seep from my heart
But no, you can't
[[You won't look
me in the eye]]
How can you betray me?
Baby carve your name
So everyone will know
There won't be any doubt
[[I would never
forsake you]]
The one I loved
I'm your sacrifice again
You could have asked me
You could have handed me the dagger
I would have done it for you
But you betrayed me
Will you miss me when I'm gone?
{{I grow weak,
I fall to the floor}}
You place a red, red rose on my chest
The blood shimmers
Soaking, tainting
The red, red blood-stained rose
You tell me I'm beautiful
You tell me you love me still
{{Sweet poison,
words I don't want to hear}}
I'm growing numb, slipping from reality
My eyes... I cannot see your sweet face
Your sweet lying face
Your poison coated lips
Kiss me one last time
Say goodbye to the heart you broke
I know you'll forget all about me
Although you swear you won't
I'll curse you
Carve my name in your heart
I'll haunt your dreams
Kill you in your sleep
"I'll be your pretty little nightmare" I whisper
{{Forever and for always baby,
&& that's a promise}}
My breath falters
My heart skips
This is the final moment
I am lost to the world
((I hate you
I despise you}}
[[You won't get away with what you did to me
&& I won't let you forget how you killed me]]
Author notes
Dedication: Bobby, thanks for breaking my heart babe.
Contest stuff:
2: Watch the blood seep from my heart
10: Lost to the world
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390 points, ended July 20, 2007, 16 entries
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Very strong piece, the last line is haunting!
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awesome....just effing awesome!!! I loved this
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OMG. I love this. The metaphors and allusions are just amazing. GREAT write!
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Tragic love sucks like I guy that is embarrassed to show you off and then turns around and slaps you in the face because he doesn’t care. Yet another AMAZING write! Keep it up!
Darkness
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Wow, this was really great...i loved the coldness in the words...Just know if this doesnt place it would have been right up there with the top entries..it really stands out. Good job and thank you so much for entering this piece in my contest
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