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She Awakens

Peeking out from shroud of night,
her golden hair begins to glisten
as morning tiptoes

Stretching herself from darkened repose,
she mesmerizes all around her
with expanding radience

Just before Dawn crowns the day,
she adorns herself in shimmering scarlet robe
and sash of citrus hues

shedding glory on all

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PROMPT: LADY IN RED

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  • AsIThink gold member
    January 15

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    Hmmmm...the sun's like this too...

    I loved the imagery here; the serenity it invokes in me. I had a rough day at work and this is so soothing to imagine; to long for. Really very nice feel and sound.

    AsIThink...


  • DancingRed
    September 21, 2007

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    The last stanza is very lovely and colourful; I love the image of that 'sash of citrus hues'.

    Parts of the beginning seem a little ordinary in comparison - 'morning approaches', 'darkened slumber'. A very fine entry all the same.

    Thanks for entering.

    DancingRed.


  • penman gold member
    July 7, 2007
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    Excellent

    Very well done. Really so creative. Congrats on your trophies.


  • MourningSun
    July 6, 2007

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    This poem deserves to win definately. It is amazingly written and just wonderful. It is a great write. I really enjoyed reading it.


  • Matt Holck
    July 6, 2007
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    a central knot of awareness


  • Rele anmwe
    July 6, 2007
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    citrus hues, very nice line. great piece


  • soulfultia gold member
    July 6, 2007

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    Beautiful write on a sunrise, you had an excellent piece! Excellent, a unique step you took with the prompt! Loved it *grin8 ~Tia


  • Dirka
    July 6, 2007

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    This one has my mind thinking. For it could be many things, and that is why I like it.

    Thank you for entering my contest.


  • Dirka
    July 6, 2007
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    time is counting down do not foget you get your poem in


  • Dirka
    July 6, 2007
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    Prompt : Lady in Red

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