Here behind rain-splattered glass
I sit in the embrace of the past
In puddles, memories of those days
Glisten and dance beneath the golden rays
Of the sun peeping out from behind the clouds
Which cast shadows over the sodden ground
The chill in the air reminds of the cold
Of walking life’s winding road alone
Those days now have long since gone
Yet forever will the memories live on
Locked inside the casket of my core
The lonely tears will fall no more
But yet I can never erase the scars
That loneliness engraved upon my heart
When you cry each day you see
Fear of the dark begin to breed
And more desperately you seek the light
To banish the demons from your night
Yet hope is never lost for long
You can be cleansed of your wrongs
The rain which falls from darkest of skies
Washes away sins you hold inside
Then as you venture into the unknown
You’ll no longer stand alone
Author notes
I cannot find this song on YouTube....so here is a link to the lyrics
Song: Standing Alone
Artist: Tyketto
http://www.lyricsdownload.com/tyketto-standing-alone-lyrics.html
I hope my poem is what you were looking for. I had a bit of trouble with the rhyme as may be obvious, but I've enjoyed your contest! Thank you! xxx
A contest entry
- Mystery Rounds Contest - Round 3 by Broken - Doll.
1000 points, ended July 15, 2007, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Its beautiful,when I started reading it, I thought it had the flow of a song,very well written.
Its always good to know that in the gloomy of times,there is always hope,and everybody needs to hear that more.
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Oh, I just love this... the deep emotion, the feeling of hope, the spiritual overtones. So beautiful!!
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thank you i appreciate you taking time to read and comment! xxx
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This is a lovely piece. I had never heard this song, so it was fun to see somethinhg new and your take on it. This was a great piece with lovely rhyme. Thank you for the entry, and all the time you put into it.
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Beautiful
To me Sweet Sam you wrote an incredibley beautiful poem and I really did not see a problem it it not rhyming because I just loved the way this poem went. any ways the flow was good and the wording was superb. your over all way of posting this poem was cool. I really enjoyed the way you posted this and will always love you and your poetry and everything about ya. keep up the good work beautiful Sweet Sam
With love for you always, Paul P.S. You won't be eharing from me much after Monday due to health *sigh*
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