A soul in limbo
Memories locked deep
The gates of hell have opened
It's fury has been unleashed
Drowning sinking further
A mask of lies and deceit
Insanity is knocking at the door
Searching for some inner peace
Beckoning and calling out
Demons waging a battle
Another mind departed
*Lost to the world*
Author notes
quote #10 "Lost to the world"
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A contest entry
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390 points, ended July 20, 2007, 16 entries
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This is an amazing write. My favorite lines are :
Insanity is knocking at the door
Searching for some inner peace
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well sone this is an awsume write, good luck and thanks for entering! -
I know you feel lost to the world but you aren't. You have people who love you. Your poetry has gotten better. Keep it up.
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Thanks for your wonderful comments. I know that I am so loved and have many friends who love me. That is what gets me through each day I am trying my hand at free verse more lately, I don't know if it is that good but I am trying. Thanks again
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WOW!
WOW! Girl! This is fantastic! An awesome write! Keep the ink flowing! Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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I am trying my hand at free verse lately. I don't know if I am good at it or not but this what came to mind. Thanks for your wonderful comments
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I really liked this...it was really descriptive and dark. The flow was right on and i really liked the picture you used at the beginning of the poem..it added a lot to it...good job and thank you for entering my contest
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