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Lisa's death


Death’s angel makes mistakes
Death’s angel shows its evil form in its mistakes
Hit or miss
Kill and kill again

Careless evil spirits after your soul
It’s findings less than satisfying

Instincts may tell one to run & hide
And some say it’s the strong that survive

But what about the hindered spirit
The tormented soul
Where is this soul left when death’s wrath falls

So strong outwardly, yet so lost inside
Everyone loves you
Perfection is anything but seen, though

Is it what’s reaped that was sown
A mockery you’ve made that came back to slap you in the face
Was your soul at peace when death succeeded in its mission
I can only hope

Who knew the life & death of a stranger
Could invoke in me what you have

Author notes

Sharett- Silversunshine

The day before she died, the vehicle she was riding in struck a small child whose last name was the same as hers & killed him. She believed that she was meant to die that day, not the child. Her inevitable death came the following day. This is a true story.

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  • Desiree-Valdez
    August 6, 2007
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    wow that is deep and beautifully written. Wow that story is something else also.