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Hoary

Ancient letters flutter down,

torn at their deep cresses,

edges tattered beyond recognition.

 

Words sent skittering down pages,

smudged by sweaty fingertips,

eroded by oils of the skin,

left as faint ink stains.

 

Their envelope deteriorates

as it is ripped open,

turning into flakes of dust.

 

Left in forgotten wallets,

red leather cracked with time,

holding a few faded pictures,

snapshots of the past.

 

Memories in old trunks,

forgotten in lapses of time

left to crumble into nothing

around the rotted leather.

 

Held precious through generations,

but nothing escapes time's spell. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Hoary
My definition: screaming so loud that your voice goes hoarse and you can't talk.
Real definition: ancient or venerable

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  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    July 9, 2007

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    Beautiful poem full of relatable imagery. Congratulations on your gold trophy!


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    July 6, 2007

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    Yeah I can understand how you could think that about the word. Good guess. Your poem is awesome. Your talent is incredible. Very impressive. I am so glad you have entered and have given me the opportunity to read your work. I am honored. Best of luck.

    Jeannie