Ancient flames dance
as clan gathers in chant
to native drums.
Eagle-feathered head dress
adorns crown
of Chief Smokey Bear
with sacred tools in hand
wrapped in rawhide;
warrior and squaw join together
paying homage to the Gods.
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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Oy!!
Wonderful piece busy bee and love the reference to the homage payed to Gods
Love how You took this prompt!
So darn quick--- Quickie Queen
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Wonderful job poet. Again...something other than the obvious was expressed here. I love romance, but I also love creatively thinking outside the box.
Nicely done!
Best of luck!
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Nice, interesting take on the prompt. I loved it! I can just...picture this scene in my head. I smell something...something nice and shiny...and you know good and well what I mean. Good job!
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Awesome!!!
What a breathtaking piece, my friend!
Wow!
All the best to you in this challenge!!! Wow! -
Your prompt is: Starlight in Your Eyes
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