The one who fears to venture beyond his front door
Never dared to try for more
Being young means doing everything,
Simply because its better than nothing
So for tonight he'll try, he'll try, he'll try,
He'll eat second-hand food
For first-hand experience
Its really too easy, just leave your brain at home
And only bring sanity as an observer
Before he could even try
His mind let fly
When he heard everyone whisper aloud:
"I once could see nine identical faces wink at me"
"I once didn't know I had my let my little head go free"
"Gave a vile gesture to the bouncer"
"Even told my girlfriend I loved her"
Oh why do they sing words so mad?
"I'd like to add,
I intend to feel sick"
Everybody wants to be, wants to be
An alcoholic
Everybody wants to be, wants to be
An alcoholic
A contest entry
- Anything && Everything (Shoot me up side the head) --all ages-- by Marilyn..
475 points, ended August 11, 2007, 58 entries
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Serve me up a rum and coke! Yummy write.
Thanks for entering, I don't think I could eat 2nd hand food even if I was drunk.
Good luck to ya! -
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this is a really great poem its unique and totally rocks " everybody wants to be, wants to be an alcholic"
but not me lol its a great poem keep it up i would like to see more from you in the near future
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Cheers(no pun intended with the subject here lol) for the kind comment, great you liked it maybe one day I'll put it to music should I have the means.Good for you, you would do well to be the complete opposite to the people I describe here for they are dull people indeed.
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