Graystorm,
A white shadow
With a mask of gold,
Came without a thought.
Graystorm,
A silent firework
Draped in golden willows,
Saw a goddess.
Graystorm,
With steel-gray eyes
And a flashing smile,
Conquered a goddess.
Author notes
Okay, yeah, just kind of random. You can't really understand it unless you know me... and even then you might not be able to... and it's REALLY hard to explain. So I'll leave it ambiguous.
For all who don't know: Vene vidi vici means "I came, I saw, I conquered." I incorporated that into the last lines of each stanza. And I'm not telling you who Graystorm is! Thanks for reading!
A contest entry
- WHAT'S IN YOUR AP NAME OR IMAGE???? by dustookie2.
3500 points, ended July 22, 2007, 25 entries
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Interestingly crafted came saw conquered....I find i am forming my own images a goddess unto the heavens a power of mythology but then a myth is a female moth
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Good Luck!!!
I love your name it sounds very powerful. My father has grey eyes, I always wanted grey too but, mine are brown. Oh well.
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