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She had him then she lost him.
He was on his way to see some friends.
But the monster took him.
The monster was drunk and he had killed
her love.
She wishes she would have been able to tell
him that she loves him one more time.
But she can't.
She knows that she can wish all she wants but
it won't come true.
The monster was charged with vechiular manslaughter,
but it doesn't really matter because she won't be able
to tell him that she loves him.
So she'll get by one day at a time and think of him.
She'll go on with her life while he won't go on with his
because some guy got the idea to drive while drunk.

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  • Jessica Lyndsay
    July 10, 2007

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    AWW that is so sad!! I know how you feel kinda of!! Read my poem always and forever... if you want to!!!
    It is about my best friend david who was killed in a car wreck about four monthes ago because of a drunk driver who hit him head on!! Sorry for your loss and if you ever need someone to talk to i'm here!! I am still very sad and think about him constantly but the pain decreases slowly!!! jess


  • ScArLeM
    July 6, 2007
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    wow sad poem but written beautifully