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Explosion the First

Because I have so many reasons to live—
And when the time comes, I’ll have a reason to die—
I press on, pressed—
Until I find no reason to step out of this car—
Until there is no other option—
I cannot get away.
And even though death doesn’t cross my mind-path
As it did when I ran beneath the fireworks with you,
Yours does—
Although for you to me, I never existed—
You never knew—



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  • The-Phoenix
    July 6, 2007

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    "And even though death doesn’t cross my mind-path
    As it did when I ran beneath the fireworks with you,
    Yours does—
    Although for you to me, I never existed—
    You never knew—"

    I love this part the most. This is very deep and very interesting. Like all deep poetry, you could get so many meanings from out of it. I'll have to remember to ask you what inspired this.

    Great Job!
    ~Megan