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" Here In This Moment "

Let the soft rain fall upon us
 
from the dark,
 
sultry clouds.
 
 
  As we begin this night ...
 
No candles to light our way ...
 
 
You find me in the darkness,
 
your keen senses
 
enlightened by the mystery of this night. 
 
 
Let us ride wave after wave of emotions,
 
merging together as one upon the shore. 
 
 
For when I close my eyes,
 
you are the ocean which fills my dreams.
 
 
  As I awake,
 
It is you like the sunshine gently kissing my face.
 
 
  Your loving arms reach out
 
to encompass me with your nakedness. 
 
 
Lie here with me 
 
 
  feel my warmth 
 
 
For you are the music
 
which dances within my soul. 
 
 
Let's perform the magical dance of love one more time  
 
 
Let the soft rain fall upon us ...
 
 
again

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  • bananasfoster42
    August 2, 2007
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    this is a sweet write. thanks for entering


  • ScottishPrincess silver member
    July 28, 2007

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    I love this,this is just beautiful and powerful,full of emotion and you have portrayed a great image..Hazel


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    July 13, 2007

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    Congratulations on your silver trophy, it realy is well earned. Your poem is written with a soft tenderness that touches the reader in a very personal way. There is so many beautiful emotions flowing from your poem and all of them are very beautiful.

    I loved this piece and to me... it is as good as gold...


  • Painful Expressions
    July 10, 2007

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    Beautifully Written

    I love the soft tenderness of this piece. It is an amazing story of love and sincerity. Thank you so much for such a pleasurable read...Michael


  • Nephalaneous lover
    July 9, 2007
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    wonderful, absolutely wonderful, good luck in the contest


  • BillyClyde
    July 6, 2007
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    Beautiful

    Very nice...as always


  • pearl-dragon
    July 6, 2007

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    What a beautifully warm and tender thought to send to someone. I wish you all the best of luck in this contest

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