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Wonder Love

Have you ever……
Loved someone so much
It made you want to cry?

Have you ever ……
Felt so full of love
You thought you’d burst into?

Take a breath inhale your love
Then touch the sky
With wonder

In a list

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  • DancingRed
    July 15, 2007

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    Ah, this is great. Your words are pure awesomeness.

    "inhale your love
    Then touch the sky
    With wonder"

    I love it. It tingles in my soul, the way good poetry should.

    Thanks for entering.

    DancingRed.


  • lifehatesme
    July 6, 2007
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    great

    nice poem