I had plans to see you
I wanted to contact you
Now I'm lost in this state
Of loss and pain
How could I have let it go on
Your such a great person
You impacted my life and many more
But now its too late
Your already gone...
In my heart I hold your memory
The times we had in school
You were such a wonderful kid
The evil took you away
Evil led you to that drug
I wish I could have done something
Its too late your already gone
In a better place
Meeting up with the ones you lost
Hopefully when the time comes
You'll be there to meet me
I hope you forgive me
I wish i could have said good-bye
Kirk I miss you!
Author notes
This is a freewrite but its also wrote as an apologie to one of my best friends. He died on the 26th of June but what sounds to be an overdose on methadone...and i hadn't talked to him in about 4 years. I feel bad! I miss him like crazy!
Please tell me what you think
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Hi there. I'm glad you have a place to hang your hat and share. Our family had a death as well. June 22. My sister.
but it was equally a glorius day because it was cancer and had her by the throat for a long time. I am sure it is more devastating to get such a shocking exit as this. I'm so sorry.
It is a good piece with many thoughts that should be said to release the anguish.
I must admit that I had to click this one on because I have a son, Kirk. It's not a common name.
Good write. Thank you for sharing and I do wish you the best!
as from me...
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Well expressed, and all rather sad really... it conveys a very important message - to appreciate the time we have with the good people around us, and to let them know, as often as we can, how much they mean to us. I think that in some way or another, many people will relate to this, and hopefully, get in touch with the ones they care about. All in all, a well written, touching piece. I hope that you are ok.
David. x
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Sorry
You did well to express your thoughts
This is how I relieve my anguish
Whatever works, have peace
Rick
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The pain behind watching someone die from drugs is a slow torture when you have much love for that person. I've witnessed it firsthand myself. She was like a sister to me, and she overdosed on heroin. Very heartfelt, especially for a freehand. It touches home for me.
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God, hun...That's really rough. This is very heartfelt and I'm so sorry you have to go through this. Don't feel too bad, don't be too hard on yourself. Bad shit happens.
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thanx for the comment... its rough yes especially since his b day was yesterday and i'm not really taking it out on myself too bad at least i think...i'm just a little depressed. Thanx for the caring toughts and ohh yeah the hug
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