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Blood Soaked Smile

Blood
Leaking from the creases
Of the cracks on my lips
I smile to you
With it dripping down my chin
Terror fills within [you]
You never understood
Why I never smiled
I only smile
When the pain is overwhelming
Because this is my release
You have caused me so much pain
And now a blood soaked smile
Is all I have for you

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  • Angel of Diamonds
    July 20, 2007
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    wow this is great well done,

    well done, and good luck!


  • Dark Angel Reborn
    July 6, 2007

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    I really really liked this, I'm a sucker for description and you definatly had it...really really good job with this piece and good luck