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Disapointement

Today someone asked
If I would like to be able to go back
And change all the things that had gone wrong
In my Life
And although at first
The idea seemed rather appealing
I quickly realized
That the good and the bad are so intertwined
That I couldn’t change part
Without changing the whole

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  • Wall Door Salad
    September 29, 2008

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    "The idea seemed rather appealing"
    "Without changing the whole"
    ha! love this poem alot.
    very plain and blunt.
    nice write


  • LuchiaNanami
    March 23, 2008
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    ...wow...

    that was really sad...


  • Ipanickedatthedisco
    August 17, 2007
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    yeah...it's true!
    I like this! ♥