I have LoCkEd myself in this box of DARKNESS
c~u~r~l~i~n~g up like a snake, cold, withd*r*a*w*n*.
You b l e w out the c/a/n/d/l/e/s that kept my soul alight
with your l and deception all l/i/f/e is CrUsHeD.
i
e
s
As I sweetly b>l>e>e>d your touch from me
I gladly
f
a
l
l
into
mindless
oblivion.
A contest entry
- Show me your best Dirty Pretty by Nobody Royale.
500 points, ended July 6, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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very nice...the falling lines added a nice dark beauty to it..I liked the imagery the words provided as well...my favorite line
As I sweetly b>l>e>e>d your touch from me
I love the line and the way its set up...well done.. thank you for your entry and good luck.. -
Hey, I like this...good going, poet!
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very good i really enjoyed reading this
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Wow...just wow.
it spoke so much truth and emotion and the layout and form it was written in worked really well with the poem and the words.
an absolute awsome poem good luck in the contest.
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